नींद क्या टूटी
मेरा सपना भी टूट गया
एक सुखद मोड़ पर,
मुझे लगा खत्म हुआ सपना
तभी मेरे दिल ने फुसफुसाया
अभी सिर्फ मध्यांतर है हुआ …
❤️🧡💚💙💌💜🤎🖤💖
My sleep was broken
dream was also broken
when it had taken a happy turn,
the dream was over, I thought
but my heart whispered
it was only an intermission…
–Kaushal Kishore
What a lovely little poem, Kaushal. that tells the power of a dream! Many a time I would wish that my dream would not be just a dream, but a reality!
Thank you.
Joanna
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I also think so, Joanna, but it rarely happens. The thing is that a dream is broken, because sleep is broken. So broken sleep is culprit, otherwise dream will continue. Thank you!
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You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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गजब ..
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धन्यवाद 😊
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Splendid, sir! 👌
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Thank you so much 😊
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Brilliant as always , KK. Truly enjoyed.💕
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Thanks a lot, Grace for your kind appreciation 💖
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My pleasure.💕
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Love this sweet poem! 🦋
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Thank you, Tamara for your kind words 😊
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A lovely concept, KK. 🦋🙏
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Haha, Jeff, thank you 😊💐
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You’re welcome, KK. Always. ☺️💛
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Wonderful 👌🏼
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Thanks a lot 😊💐
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Interval in dreams nice👌👌💐💐
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Yes. Have you experienced? Thank you 😊💐💐
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Great compact composition on Dream, heart n intermission👍
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I loved your beautiful feedback. Thank you so much 😊
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You are welcome
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How wonderful it would be to resume a dream from where It paused for a break
But I start dreaming a brand new one 😊💐
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I had a boss, who used to experience intervals, and very often. I told him he was a lucky guy.😊🤗💐
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Thats pretty interesting 😊
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Lovely and sweet. Whenever we have bad dream, after waking up it’s so relief to know that it was just a dream! For a feel good dream, we wish it should happen in real !
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Very well said, Veena ji. It happens normally with all of us. Thanks for reading and sharing your own experience.
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this is just lovely and well penned. an intermission.. love it💖💖🤗🤗
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Glad, you loved it. Thanks a lot 😊🤗💖
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you’re so welcome.. 💖💖
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I wish we could have intermission in dreams and be able to go back afterwards. I love the roses.
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I too wish, but no success. Thank you for your interesting comment.
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Loved this, KK. ❤
I have learned to go back to sleep and continue my dreams…sometimes. Gorgeous roses! Do you grow them? All the best! 🙂
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Really, Cheryl? Continue your dreams? I simply wish to. Yes, I grow roses, but they never come in dreams. Thank you 😊💐
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Wao! I love this. It’s speaks of love…
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Glad to hear that. Thank you 😊
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