
उस पेड़ को लगता था फल और पत्ते उसके हैं,
पर मुझे वहम था पेड़ और उसके फसल मेरे हैं…
लेकिन तभी तूफान आया, सब कुछ छूट गया,
मेरा और पेड़ का वहम, एक झटके में टूट गया…
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In solitude, I thought the tree was mine alone,
The tree believed its bounty was all its own…
But then a big storm swept through the air,
And shattered the illusion we both did share…
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–Kaushal Kishore
image: pinterest
Interesting twist on the delusions of illusions. 😉🫣🤓
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Thank you, Pat! So pleased, you liked the twist in the poem.
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Very clever and you are welcome, Kaushal.
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🙏
Aum Shanti
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Om Shanti 🙏
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And in the aftermath, the shatterlings may be gathered and something much stronger and more flexible built by combining the pieces?
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Yes, why not, this is also a possibility. I love your positivity. Thank you so much!
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Thank you, Kaushal, for your clever and wise reflection! We can overestimate our importance and when this illusion is shattered we have to learn the lesson and start modestly anew.
I like the perfect image!
Joanna
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You’re absolutely right, Joanna, learning a lesson is more important to start afresh. Thank you so much for appreciating the poem and image. It always means so much to me.
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Thank you, Kaushal, ad you are welcome as always!
Joanna
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Very nice, kk
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Thanks a lot, KC!
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Beautiful meaningful poetry 🌺🌺
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Thanks so much, Satyam!💐💐
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वहम एक ऐसा मर्ज़ है जिसकी कोई दवा नहीं पर एक दवा है विश्वास की जो हर वहम को अलविदा कर सकती है 🌺
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बिल्कुल सही। आत्म विश्वास से भरा व्यक्ति के पास भ्रम का कोई अस्तित्व ही नहीं। धन्यवाद।💐
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This seems like one of those poems that I will come back and read again and busting new illusions.
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So nice of you to say so! Thank you so much!
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This is a nice poem, Kaushal. The loss of a tree is sad.
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So happy you liked the poem, Mary! Thanks a lot!
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Well done, Kaushal. That cycle of bounty embraces all life…nature’s too. Great insight and comparision…brilliant!
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Well said, Suzette! I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you!
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Thank you Kaushal for your wisdom keys delivered beautifully in poetry’s guise.
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That’s so very kind! Thanks and namaste!
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Oh wow, beautiful Kaushal! Love this! 🤗💖🥰
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So pleased to hear that! Thanks a lot, Kym, for your kind words 🙏💐💖
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Oh my dear Kaushal, you are absolutely welcome my friend. My pleasure! 🤗💖🙏🏼
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🙏💐💖
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Well done, KK. A lovely verse.
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Thank you, Nancy, for your appreciation!
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Nice perspective 👍
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Thank you so much 🙏💐
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Most of the time we live in illusion without thinking the truth beautiful poem
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Yes, that’s right. Thank you for your kind comment!
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Wisdom in rhyme! An excellent blog. 🤙🙏✨️
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So happy to hear that! My sincere thanks 🙏💐
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That’s the way life is sometimes. Good poem.
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Yes, life’s like that only. Thanks a lot!
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Sad but true sometimes.
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I agree with you! Thanks a lot!
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Awwww!
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Thanks a lot!
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You are more than welcome!
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Haha so creative and thought provoking
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Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!
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Welcome
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