Time


I used to see him sitting alone
on a bench in the society garden,
with his eyes inviting passers-by
to sit beside him for a while
and talk to him…

He might also have talked
nonsense to his sweetheart
for the umpteenth time
in his younger days,
but now in the sunset years,
there is nobody to talk to him
either sense or nonsense…

He still sits there,
but now he has purchased
four plastic chairs
to keep in front of that bench
so that people coming to him
doesn’t feel uncomfortable
while sitting on the iron bench
in this winter season…

And what does this octogenarian
want in return?
Time, yours and mine,
nothing else,
he has enough time,
while others don’t have any…

Time plays truant,
it doesn’t behave
in a manner we like,
time has its own timings
to time all of us,
but time always beckons all of us
to share, to give and get time,
so given by it suitably
from time to time
to maintain a balance
between the two timings…


–Kaushal Kishore

62 Comments

  1. Your poem so thought-provoking on many levels. You carefully choose the tenses to also illustrate times autobiography in human existence. Brilliant.
    For me these Ines resonated summarily:.

    “Time plays truant,
    it doesn’t behave
    in a manner we like”

    – Sublime piece, Kaushal

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    1. Thank you so much, Suzette for your considered views and deep reflections and appreciation that I truly appreciate. I’m happy that those lines stood out for you.

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  2. Thank you, Kaushal, for bringing up this subject again. We talked about this before, and I told you how an old woman, 90 years old asked to come to tea as she was lonely.
    Of course, I obliged and we were friends until she passed away five years later.
    We have here an initiative of pledging your time to someone, called “Every minute Counts”, also a helpline for people who feel desperately lonely.

    Joanna

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    1. I remember, Joanna, you had once mentioned about that nonagenarian lady. To my mind, the most precious gift one can give to someone is time that you gave to that lady. Really appreciable.
      I’m glad to know about the initiative, “Every Minute Counts”. Thank you for sharing it. Once I had written about “Time Bank” scheme of Switzerland, which has now been adopted in several countries. This is a positive development.

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  3. That is so sad and so true. For many elderly old age is a ghetto. I’ve heard the UK has established a department to call pensioners occasionally for a wellness check and just let they know somebody cares about them. I’ve also read where some elderly in Japan commit small crimes because their life has more purpose and companionship in jail.

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    1. You’re right, Pat. Their plight is miserable. The UK initiative you have talked about is really appreciable, but crime by elderly in Japan is unfortunate. You might be knowing about “Time Bank” of Switzerland that has been replicated in several countries. I think it’s a welcome initiative.

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    1. You’re absolutely right. The fact is that we don’t value a thing including time when we have, but when it’s past us, we simply regret, and then we think it was so precious. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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