
इस तरह बांधने की
क्या जरूरत थी मुझे?
कह दिया होता
प्यार से एक बार,
तो यहीं पड़ी रहती
तुम्हारे पास ताउम्र…
🪢🪢🪢🪢🪢🪢
What was the need
to bind me like this?
If you had told me
once with love,
I would have stayed here
with you for the rest of my life…
–Kaushal Kishore
Amazing how much emotion/passion you captured so beautifully in a few lines. Amazing write, Kaushal as always, thoughtful and moving poetry.
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Thank you, Suzette, for always being there with your generous words and encouraging comment that I truly appreciate and cherish. Thanks so much!
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A pleasure ✍️💖
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This is sooooo beautiful, Kaushal ji. ♥️♥️♥️😊😊😊
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So glad to hear that, Thank you, Aparna ji 😊💐💖
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Thank you, Kaushal, for making me smile! The picture that you used, as an illustration, is funny, I just hope that the little sweetheart wasn’t hurt in any way.
Otherwise, your verse has a profound meaning when applied to humans.
Joanna
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I’m glad that the picture made you smile. I appreciate your concern for the little creature. Thank you so much!
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You are more than welcome!
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Such a heartfelt and beautiful piece, my friend . Amazing .💕
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Thank you, Grace, for your kind support that means a lot 😊💞
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My pleasure 💕
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🙏
Aum Shanti
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Very touching words but the picture distresses me. I follow small birds for the Birds Canada Feederwatch project and this little bird will not survive bound up like this. And that of course is why the photo is perfect for your poem!!
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You’re right, Anne, it’s very inhuman to tie a bird or a little creature like this. In fact this picture itself prompted me to write this poem. Thank you for your kind reflections!
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Beautiful💕🙂
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Thank you, Saima😊💖
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Some people don’t know anything else but to bind and trap and do everything but have a honest love it’s almost criminal some of these relationships these days unhealthy to say the least.
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I agree with you in toto, this is exactly what is happening nowadays. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Great share, KK👏
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Thanks so much, Vidah 😊
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Heartbreaking that some people only know force and coercion…when the strongest chain of all is love. So beautifully said, KK! 💞💞💞
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Such people don’t know that love can win all wars in this world. Thank you, Dawn for your kind appreciation 😊💖💖
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Yeh pardke शिवमंगल सिंह सुमन ji ki kavita yaad aa gai.
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कौन सी कविता? मुझे याद नहीं आ रहा है। प्लीज बताना मुझे।
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हम पंछी उन्मुक्त गगन के।
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अब याद आया। बहुत ही सुंदर कविता है – स्वर्ण श्रृंखला के बंधन में … बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद।
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Beautiful and powerful! ❤️ Thank you Kaushal!
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Thank you, Filipa, for your kind words and support 😊💖
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Ah, love should always be unbound. Lovely, KK. 🌹🌻🍂
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Thank you, Jeff! Glad you liked it 🌻🍁🥀
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You’re welcome, KK! Always. 🍂🌻🌹
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Bonding with animals and birds are really appreciable.
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You’re absolutely right. Thank you!
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You’re always welcome, Kaushal ji🙏
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