
We keep moving ahead
changing lanes and bylanes
carrying the smell of their soil
that had its own culture and flavour
meeting new people on the way
and saying goodbye to them
at lopsided intervals…
While moving ahead
suddenly we start seeing
mounds and ridges
to find ourselves in a deserted lane,
with so many other dunes
forming, deforming and reforming
all the way
but flowing with good deal of stories,
some pleasant, some unpleasant
some real, some distorted
some ugly and some beautiful…
We gradually get acclimatised
with them to be one of them
to become one more story
moving from a lively world
to a lonely desert,
where we all become small,
lose ourselves,
ending up in a mirage,
but where others come
to find some footprints so left,
a few flowers of beauty,
an oasis of love
amid those sand dunes,
they are not normally wrong…

–Kaushal Kishore
images: pinterest
very nice.
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Thanks so much!
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Thank you, Kaushal, for the poignant lesson in history, the subject that is one of the most interesting. I am often aware of the people who were here before us when standing in ancient places like 1000 years old tower in Oxford. The worn-out steps make you imagine all the people who went up and down in all those years. It also gives you a sense of your own insignificance in history, which you have described so well.
Joanna
PS. I love the pictures!
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Thank you, Joanna, for such an eloquent and thoughtful comment that I read thrice. I’m glad you liked the post and pictures.
When one becomes a part of history, it’s upto others to tell, retell, interpret, depict or distort as per their whims and fancies, as we have seen in number of cases.
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Thank you, Kaushal! I thought it is only me who reads your words trice! I am trilled!
Joanna
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We all sail in the same boat, after all. Thank you, Joanna!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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🙏
Aum Shanti
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Amazing piece, KK. Truly enjoyed.💕
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Thank you, Grace! Glad you enjoyed it 😊💖
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My pleasure. I sure did.💕
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Awesome poem, Kaushal ji. It’s so beautiful. 😊😊😊♥️♥️
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Thank you, Aparna ji for your kind words 😊💖
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you for sharing!
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There can’t be a future without history. Well said 😌
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I’m glad that this resonates with you. Thank you, Qonyike!!
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Oh breathtaking imagery. Kaushal, I like very much how you switched up the word “desert” and “deserted” to shift meaning and imagery – Brilliant!!!
Love these lines…
“a few flowers of beauty,
an oasis of love
amid those sand dunes,
they are not normally wrong…:
– absolutely, I agree they are not wrong👍
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Thank you, Suzette, for your wonderful comment that made me truly happy. I appreciate the way you have picked up and explained the important aspect of the poem. Thanks again!!
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My pleasure. Thank you for your work, Kaushal!
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Beautiful Imagery and loved your poem KK!!
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Thank you, Cindy! So happy to hear that 😊
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What an interesting narrative. I love it ❤
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Thank you, Lamittan for your encouraging words 😊💖
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Much obliged, my dear friend
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It touches deep.
Nicely expressed!
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So glad to hear that. Thanks so much!!
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You are welcome!
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Such beautiful pictures painted with your words, KK 💞💞💞
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So glad to know that you think so. Thank you, Dawn 💖💖
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I love the imagery in this, Kaushal!
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It’s truly my pleasure, Dawn! Thank you!
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