
Whenever it started coming out,
I used to stitch or darn it
to mend and amend,
at times I got satisfied
at my own artistry,
but at times,
while trying to do it
my own needle hurt me,
it pricked my finger deep inside
that not only squeezed out
a drop of blood,
but also a drop
of my bloated misconception…

It was my folly
that I thought of a relationship
as a piece of fabric,
that is bound to get old,
dulled or even torn
with efflux of time,
due to use, abuse or misuse…
Now I take a relationship
as a plant that needs
understanding as sunlight,
love like water,
and trust like air,
that get refreshed
with the first rays of dawn,
when I join my two hands
in salutation š pose,
one hand of mine and
the other of the relationship,
with the only wish and prayer
to keep a childlike plant,
deep inside me,
always…

–Kaushal Kishore
images: pinterest
Fabulous lines, Kaushal ji. Simply Awesome! ā„ļøā„ļøššš
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Thank you, Aparna ji, for your words of appreciation ššš
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Excellent thought in a style.
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Thank you, Verma ji.
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Thank you, Kaushal, for your philosophical musings that are memorable and
beautiful in their complexity as everything you write. Always.
Joanna
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Yes, he is. l agree with you.
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Thank you, Eunice!
Joanna
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You are welcome.
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Thank you, Joanna, for your unwavering support, as always, that I always cherish.
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You are more than welcome!
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Bloated misconceptions? KK Papa, you are so real.
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Thank you, Eunice Bete, for your loving comment, as always š
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You are welcome.
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Excellent meditation on the value of what one chooses to hold dear.
Your lines resonated well for me…
“…love like water,
and trust like air,”
– deep thinking crafted such excellent metaphors. Wow!
Awesome sharing Kaushal, Bravo!!
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I’m elated that you think so, Suzette. It truly means a lot to me. Thank you for your generous words and deep reflections!
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My pleasure Kaushal. Happy creating!
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Amazing piece, KK. Wonderful .ššššš
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Thank you, Grace for your blissful comment ššš
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My pleasure, KK.š
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Wonderfully profound, Kaushal!
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Thank you, Dawn! So glad that you liked the piece š
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much!
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Very beautiful thoughts, eloquently expressed, KK! ⤠⤠ā¤
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Thank you so much, Cheryl, for your supportive comment, as always ššš
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“but also a drop
of my bloated misconception⦔
lovely symbolism throughout your wonderful poem KK!
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Thank you, Cindy! Loved your kind words of appreciation šš
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This is a beautiful one KK.
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Thank you so much, Anne !!
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Wonderful poem of nurturing and caring. Your wording and phrasing are superb!
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Thank you, Nancy for your kind words of appreciation that truly means a lot!
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Wisdom for the weary. Lovely.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation!!
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