
The dam of my hopes
got shattered with despair
self-confidence slipped like sand
and my ocean of silence
started finding its Challenger Deep,
when my mind looked for answers
that my heart kept posing
feeling emptiness in the fullness
of uncertainties…
I sought solitude
in a room of darkness
that had no answers,
when a piece of ray
started dangling
from a corner in front of me…

I came out into the open
and saw how sun was walking
with confident steps
and how flowers and leaves
were smiling at him and each other,
some kids were giggling
over anything and everything,
I spent some time
listening to their chirping
without judging them
by wearing their vision glasses…
I was in a different world now
with no fear of failure
no desperation or stess,
now I know
how beautiful this world is…
Now I come out of my home
without any reason
on and often
to meet and hug
the pretty creations of the nature
that keep smiling
without any expectation…

I’m also a creation
of the same benevolent nature,
I knock on its door
to instill love in my hearts
that no longer has any question
to bother my mind,
and my ocean of silence
looks up at the sparkling sun
with a witty smile…
–Kaushal Kishore
Absolutely fantastic. I loved the smooth transition from a tinge of sadness to positivity and enthusiasm. Wonderful lines, Kaushal ji. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Yes, Aparna ji, I like the transition from gloom to bloom. Thanks so much for your words of appreciation 😊💖💗
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Nature has the power to heal us…. Beautifully written ❤️
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You’re very right. Thanks for reading and commenting 😊💖
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Very clever and intuitive, KK. I loved it! 👓
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Thank you, Nancy for your unwavering support 😊
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Wonderful poem KK. My favorite line is” I spent time listening to their chirping without judging them by wearing their vision glasses.” A beautiful reminder to see people as a glorious creation without judgement.
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I’m grateful to you, Mary for underlining those favourite lines. It makes a lot of difference if we see from the innocent eyes of children. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful reflections!
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Beautiful poem Sir.
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Thank you, Verma ji.
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Beautiful perspectives and at the same time, a meditation: on how nature nutures by its shining example, encourages hearts by its vibrancy, and instills hope by its silent zest for life. Bravo!! I love this!
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Very well said, Suzette! I’m overwhelmed with your thoughtful words. Mother nature always nurtures us whether we reciprocate or not. Thank you so much!
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You are most welcome Kaushal. I enjoy your thoughtful presentations.
Mother nature is gracious indeed..
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Thanks so much 😊
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Amazing poem, KK. Wonderful. Love it.💕
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Thanks a lot, Grace for your support and kind words 😊💖
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Always a pleasure 💕
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The solitude diaries ! 😊
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Solitude plays its own role 😊
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What a wonderful idea, Kaushal, to be able to change our perception of life just by putting on childhood vision glasses and looking at the world with the innocent eyes of a child. Thank you!
Joanna
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That’s exactly what I wanted to put across with the help of this poem, as you have very rightly stated. Thank you so much, Joanna, for your kind words and support!
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You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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This is beautiful. You related all so gently, truthfully. Oh, how the life energy of Earth and her animal creatures seem to baptize our souls and heal many woes!
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Thank you, Dawn for stopping by and leaving your beautiful words. You’re right, mother earth has her own healing effects. Much appreciated!
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An amazing poem, Kaushal!
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Thank you, Dawn for your encouraging words 😊
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Amazing absolutely beautiful KK 💯
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Thank you so much 😊💐
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You are most welcome KK💞💞
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In a word, wonderful. Really have a lot to learn from you presented in such a nice way.👋👋👋💜💜💜
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Thanks so much for your generous words. I read your posts regularly. You too write very well. In fact this is the forum where we learn from one another 😊💐💖
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Really brother we are like a family here. Sharing our happiness, sadness, everything. I am grateful that you appreciated my writing. 🙏🙏🙏
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Always welcome 🙏💐
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beautiful lines lighting hope in hearts durning solitude KK💗
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Well said, Cindy! Thank you so much 😊💖
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It’s always my pleasure KK❣️
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I don’t know how I can thank you!In the morning I woke up feeling a bit gloomy!Your motivating poem turned this gloom into enthusiasm! Your beautiful poem is so thoughtful & encouraging 💕🙏🏾
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Why gloomy, Dhirendra ji? You’re already on a wonderful trip abroad to visit interesting places and monuments. But thank you for your generous words. I’m overwhelmed. Much appreciated 😊💖
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Actually I was in a gloomy mood this morning when your motivating poem brought about a change that made my day! Thank you so much 😊 By the way we have returned from our trip on 20/9/22 & posting the blogs now 🙏🏾
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Okay, that’s really great! Thanks 🙏💐
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I love this insightful and eloquent poem, KK! The intellect cannot answer questions of the heart, but a connection to nature and to those around us can. Children instinctively know this, but as adults, we sometimes forget. ❤
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You’re absolutely right, Cheryl, our so-called knowledge and experience adulterate our feelings, while children are clean and pure, unadulterated. Thank you for sharing your beautiful reflections 😊💖
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Love, love, love how you crafted the shift in perspective…may everyone find their pair of vision glasses 💞💞💞
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I’m overwhelmed with your kind words and wishes that truly mean a lot to me. Thanks so much, Dawn 😊💞💞
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