
चिलमन से जब
वह झांकते ही चले गएं,
दिल बेचैन हो बोला,
लगा दो आग इस चिलमन में,
या तो जी भर के देख लो
या जी मसोस कर रह जाओ…
🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
As she went on peeping
through the drapery,
the heart got restless
and blurted out,
set this drapery on fire,
either you see her
to the hilt,
or suppress
your feelings altogether…
–Kaushal Kishore
image:Oleksandr Pidvanhl/Pexels
वाह , क्या बात है |
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद !
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This little ditty, Kaushal, is alarming in its ambiguity!
Joanna
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Take it easy, nothing serious, Joanna. I don’t know why this comment of yours was parked in spam, probably for the first time.
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love her blurting out her beauty through your wonderful poem KK!! 💖💖👏👏
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Thank you so much, Cindy for your kind support 😊💖💐
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Wonderful piece, KK. Truly enjoyed.💕
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Thanks so much, Grace! It’s great you enjoyed 💖💖
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My pleasure .💕
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Thought provoking and very interesting imagery…Wondering…who exactly is incharge here…in this scene.. her? Someone on the other side of the window. Very intriguing Kaushal:) 💐🌹🦋
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Thank you, Karima for your wonderful comment and compliments. As regards your question, it suits me either way, hahaha. Thank you, Karima 😊🤗💐💖🥀
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Thanks 👍💖
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Ah.. lovely words! Well written and beautiful 😊
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Thank you, Simone, for your kind words and support 😊💐
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Mere beauty does not describe this piece. There are …longingly bold attributes here. Excellent!
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Well said, that’s exactly the point I wished to put across. Thanks so much for this beautiful comment!
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