मैं ने अपने प्यार को
सहेज कर रखा था सुरक्षित
जीभ की तरह
दांत सरीखे प्रहरियों के बीच..
किंतु उन्हीं दांतों ने
काट लिया जीभ को..
💕💕💕💕💕💕
I had kept my love
safe like a tongue
within the confines
of teeth-like sentinels..
but the same teeth
bit the tongue..
–Kaushal Kishore
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Kya khoob lines hai!🙌
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद 😊
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Oh very well said, Kaushal. Brilliant play on words.
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Thank you, Suzette. So glad you liked it.
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A true pleasure, Kaushal.
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So love, unexpressed, or imprisoned, becomes injury.
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Not necessarily, my friend!
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This poignant ditty, Kaushal, reminds me of the saying “biting the hand that feeds you”,
I had a few times experience that I did something good when asked to those I care about but in return, I was treated as a villain.
Joanna
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There is a Hindi saying, “neki kar dariya mein daal.” It means, “Do good, but seek no reward. Do good for the sake of good.”
Similarly there is one more saying in Hindi, “hom karte hath jalna” that means, “Do a good turn and earn a bad name”.
That’s the way of life, Joanna, we have to deal with them. Thank you.
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Apologies, Kaushal, I had a few minutes’ loss of grace.
I subscribe to the teachings of the Bhagavad Gita:
“A gift is pure when it is given from the heart to the right person at the right time and at the right place, and when you expect nothing in return.”
Joanna
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Me too!
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Deeply expressed the Irony
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Thank you, VM for your words of appreciation 😊
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🙏🌹
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Yes, masterfully writing and thoughts once again!! 💝
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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it 😊💖
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You are so welcome 🤗
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Wonderful piece, dear KK. Love it.💕
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I’m glad you liked it, Grace! Thank you ❤️💐
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My pleasure.💕
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Wonderful piece, my friend KK. ❤
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Thanks a lot. I appreciate your words 😊💖
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Glad you do. Feel most welcome 💖 😊
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वो तो अपने हैंजो दिल को दुखाने की अदा रखते हैं
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गैर कहाँ दिल का पता रखते हैं
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दिल को क्या मालूम कौन गैर है कौन अपना
वह दुखता ही रहता है क्योंकि उसे है दुखना
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brilliant piece KK! 💖
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Thank you so much, Cindy 💖
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always welcome dear! 💖
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Amazing piece!!
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Thanks a lot, Vidah!!
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Gajab hai!!
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद!!
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Wonderful simile! Love your poem.
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
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That’s some nice Jinx to words!😄
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughts 😊
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It was my pleasure ✨
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👌👌👌
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Thanks 👍
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Thank you!
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Biting means a new scar and healing
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So true! Thanks so much for sharing your view.
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Wahhhh! Keya baat hai!
Bahut khoob 👍😊👌
Fantastic post in short. Really I liked it KK Saab ji.
Regards 🙏
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Thank you so much, Arun ji. I appreciate you and your kind comment 🙂💐
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