
मेरी एक आंख की तरह
रहती तो हो मेरे पास में,
पर तुम्हे देख नहीं सकता
अपनी दूसरी आंख से...
दीदार होता है तभी
तुम्हारा खुद में..
जब देखता हूं मैं
खुद को आईने में…
👀👀👁️👀👀
Just like my one eye,
you live with me,
but I can’t see you
with the other eye...
only when I see
myself in the mirror,
I get your glimpse
within me…
–Kaushal Kishore
image: pinterest
Beautiful! 🙏🏼
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Thank you so much 🎉💐
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वाह, क्या बात है ।
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद आपको
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Intense , thats divine
Sir , the expression of feelings in your poetry charms every heart❤️❤️
दीदार को उनके नही होते हम यूँ परेशान
वजूत में हमारे हैं अब उनके वजूत के निशान
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And I love your response poems in Hindi, which are so appropriate. Thank you 💖💖
दिल में इश्क हो लेकिन नजर में दीदार नहीं
ऐसी हसरतों का क्या जब कोई इकरार नहीं
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Just perfect ,!!!!❤️❤️
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Amazing piece! 👍
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Glad you liked it. Thanks 👍
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So profound. Wonderful piece, KK.💕
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I’m happy that you think so. Thanks a lot, Grace 😊💖
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Always a pleasure .💕
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As always, Kaushal, your observations are original and clever, and that ditty is no exception.
Thank you.
Joanna
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Your comment is a bliss, Joanna. It’s inspiring and supportive. Thank you so much!
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You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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Awesome 😎
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Thank you, my friend 😊
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Wonderful reflections KK.. I’m looking at you with both eyes or one.. can you tell? 💞
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I think I deserve your full attention, Cindy, I mean both. Thank you for your lovely comment 😊💖❤️
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hahahah sweet.. 2 eyes all on you.. of course you deserve that and I’m smiling by your sweet comment! 💖💞
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😊🤗😊
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💖💖
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Beautiful, love the last line, giving me a glimpse of much love. 💗
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I’m so glad to know this. Thanks a lot, my friend 💖
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You are welcome 🤗
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Which language are you using here? Hindi, Telengu or Urdu?
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I use Hindi language and Devnagari script, but words are mixed. For example the word Deedar is used in Persian/ Urdu, but we use colloquially in Hindi too.
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Oooooh… I see👌
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