सोच सोच
सोचा था मैं ने
एक बहुत बड़ी सोच
जो बने औरों की भी सोच,
लेकिन उसी सोच पर दे दिया
लोगों ने और इतने सोच
कि भूल गया मैं
अपनी सोच…
🤔 🤔 💡 🤔 🤔
After thinking and rethinking
I had thought a big thought
that may become
the thought of others,
but on the same thought
others gave me
so many thoughts
that I forgot my own thought…
–Kaushal Kishore
Kaushal Kishore 
this is random, but it’s interesting to me that the shape of the same poem in two different languages is so different – one from the other!
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Yes, David, it can’t be translated literally. Thank you for noticing it.
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Haha. This happens actually. Sometimes the thoughts from others are more helpful, sometimes they simply tears down our thoughts completely and don’t provide a better solution. 🙏
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You’re right, Lamittan. It works both ways. One should be open to others’ ideas, but to an extent. Thanks a lot for your beautiful thoughts 🙏💐
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Certainly, my friend. You’re most welcome 🤗
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Interesting post. A bit funny in how relatable I find it. Starting out having a purpose just to later find you’ve been consumed by the thoughts & desires of others.🤔 Also your backdrop is really beautiful❤️
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Thank you, Tia for appreciating and sharing your reflections. You’re right, the idea of the poem was a bit funny. 😊💖
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So true as thoughts do often get tangled up in different opinions. Great piece.💕
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Thank you, Grace. It happens at times when we get confused instead of getting a solution.😊💖
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Very welcome. Absolutely 💕
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Another of your, Kaushal, satisfying philosophical musings. On the whole, it is productive to exchange ideas and be inspired to greatness by others, but whatever possible one should
try to be original and inventive just like you are!
Joanna
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Thank you, Joanna for being so thoughtfully supportive. I agree, the process of brainstorming is always a better option instead of breaking own head. Thanks again!
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You are more than welcome!
Joanna
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Thoughtful. Little philosophical, yet good composition 💫🌹
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Thanks a lot for your kind appreciation 😊💐
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My thoughts exactly…sometimes😊
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So nice of you, Suzette! Thank you so much 😊
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A pleasure, Kaushal.😊
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This is simply so deep🌸
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So glad you liked it. Thanks 😊
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lots to think about but I know that thing of loosing my original thought!😄
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So true, Anne! Thanks for sharing your beautiful reflections 😊💖
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knowing where we start and end is so important yet confusing at times. Loved your poem Kausal! 💖
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Well said, Cindy! I agree. Thank you for your kind comment 😊💖
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absolutely my friend and welcome!💖
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That’s exactly how it works. One thought is everyone’s thought. Awesome, KK. 🌺💕
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Yes, Jeff, that’s why brainstorming is advised. Thank you so much 😊❤️
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Exactly so. You’re welcome, KK. Always. 💖🌹
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