
सालों बाद
किताब खोलते ही
वह मुरझाया हुआ फूल
गुस्से से फूट पड़ा मुझ पर,
“अपनी यादें
जिंदा रखने के लिए
मेरी जान क्यों ले ली तुम ने?”
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Years later,
I as soon as
opened the book,
that withered flower
burst into anger at me,
“Why did you take my life
to keep your memories alive?”
–Kaushal Kishore
image: Nora Z/Pexels
I love hearing the perspective of the flower. Wonderful.💕
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Thank you, Grace. I’m so glad you liked it 😊💖
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I truly did. My pleasure.💕
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Kya baat hai
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Dhanyawad
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By title, I was expecting it to be different from the matter composed by you on “Flower”. Anyway nice one💯
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Anger is anger, whether it’s of man or flower. Thank you for your appreciation 😊💐
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I keep flowers and leaves in my books too, Kaushal, but they say thank you for keeping me as the momentum of the day you save me here!
Joanna
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Your flowers are more sensible, Joanna. They understand your perspectives. My flowers are naughty. Thank you, I liked your comment.
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You know why I like you so much, don’t you?
Joanna
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Thank you, Joanna. This is mutual.
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Oh boy..that tricky problematic question of cutting flowers. taking a life as a gift, or in this case, a nostalgic book mark. I have felt the wrath of flowers but also their acceptance…. Still I do ponder that every time I buy a bouquet. Great thought once again Kaushal🌹
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I used to keep beautiful flowers in my books. I made it a hobby, as I used to collect various types of flowers and leaves for making herbarium for botany practicals. Today I was recollecting those days. Hence these lines. Thank you, Karima for sharing your beautiful reflections 💐💐
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Me too did this when I was school student 🤣
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Hahaha, our interest is common. Thank you 🙏
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Yeah! 🙏😊
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फूल को कहिए न हो इस कदर नाराज़
क्या हुआ जो आपका कल न रहा आज
ये तो वक्त का तकाजा है
हम तो नाचीज़, और वक़्त राजा है
😊😊
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अति सुंदर 👌👌😊🤗
फूल को कह दूंगा कि बात वह मान ले
वक्त के साथ मेरी मजबूरी तो जान ले..
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गज़ब , बेहतरीन❣️❤️😊
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Absolutely lovely. 🖤
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Thanks a lot for your kind words 😊💖
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Wow…thought provoking and beautifully written!
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I’m glad you liked it, Aditi. Thanks a lot 😊
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There is an answer to that – so that your fragrance lingers over the words throughout and it’s hard to keep you alive in memory otherwise.
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A beautiful answer, Shobana. I liked it, and I think the flower would also like it. Thank you so much!!
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Lol. Thanks KK.
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this is so funny to me and fun Kausal! Thinking of the ones I still have rather rotted now.. hahahaha🤣
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I’m really glad it could tickle your funny bone, Cindy. Thank you😊🤗
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hahahahaaha meeee too KK.. thanks 🤣🤗
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KK, You could threaten to turn the ungrateful rose into compost! Haha! 🙂
Lovely poem giving the perspective of the rose. ❤ Have a wonderful day!
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Hahaha, I liked your comment. Thanks for your appreciation. It means a lot 😊💖
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What an awesome poem, KK. Just great. 🌹🌺
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Thank you so much, Jeff for your kind words of appreciation 😊💐
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Always my pleasure. 🦋🌹
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Thank you 😊
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Wonderful thought, Kaushal ji.
Indeed, flower is right. We don’t think of flowers. We go on plucking for our purposes.
Fantastic. In few lines you have drawn an excellent meaning ☺️🙏
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So happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Arun ji for appreciating and sharing your beautiful reflections 😊💐🙏
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Thank you Kaushal Ji. It was really a nice thought about the flower. Would like to see more from you. Have a wonderful time. Regards🙏😊
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So nice of you Arun ji ! Thanks a lot for your kind words 😊🙏
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😊🙏
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