A few shining drops of dew
had made an innocent flower
that chilly morning
more beautiful
with the infant rays of sun
passing through those droplets making it more beaming
and bewithcing…
I was still quivering
the cold breeze was still blowing
I couldn’t ascertain
the direction of wind
but a wave of emotions jolted me
at the sight
of those innocent droplets…
in one deep corner of my heart,
I had an apprehension
whether the last shivery night
had sent shivers down its spine
that brought tears
on its soft petals,
when I was sleeping comfortably
under velvety blankets
within the safe confines
of my four walls…
I’m not sure
whether I should also disregard
the feelings of pain and vulnerability
in my quest
for fragrance and beauty
and all what I wish…
–Kaushal Kishore
I like the first stanza the most. Seems like I am seeing this view though the light of your words. So beautiful,kk
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So nice of you, yam. I loved your comment. It means a lot to me. Thanks a lot.
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no need my dear friend.
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So we’ll expressed. The beauty and the tears woven together!
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So happy to hear that. Thank you for your kind words 🙏
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Emotional poetry, kk
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Thank you, Jane for your kind comment.
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Most welcome 👍🏻
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Beautifully written 👏🏼
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Thank you so much, Deeksha for your appreciation 😊
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This is the nature gift. It is dimond of horizon’s.
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting 🙂
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Your words charm the world, such beautifully presented👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻
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Wow! Such great words! I’m humbled. Thank you so much, Reena 😊🤗💐
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This is so beautiful! The words and heartwarming phrases ❤️
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I’m pleased to hear such pleasing words. Much appreciated 😊💖
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Your poem lightened my day. Such lovely, heartwarming and beautifully presented.
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I’m elated to hear that, Ranjhan. So nice of you. Many many thanks 😊
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It was my pleasure XOXO.😊
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Absolutely beautiful, KK.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace for your kind words 😊💖
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My pleasure .💕
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Your poetic power, Kaushal, is here in full force, as you describe the droplets of dew as “tears”
of the chilled flower!!
I love the poem, your empathy with plants, and the beautiful photos.
Thank you!!
Joanna
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So kind of you, Joanna. I’m overwhelmed with joy. Thank you. Every word of your comment means a lot to me. Much much appreciated!
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Your are more than welcome! I am honoured that we are such a good friends!!
Joanna
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Me too, Joanna. Thank you.
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Wow Nice flowers pics , you wrote wonderful article content …You are great writer k k ji 🌹🤩🤩
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You brightened my day, Siva jyothi with your generous words for me. Thank you so so much 😊🤗💐🌷
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My pleasure 🌹
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Beautiful! 💖
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Thanks a lot 😊💖
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Gorgeous photos and a beautiful reflective poem. Your kindness is evident in your empathy for your flowers. ❤
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I loved your response, Cheryl. Thank you so much for your kind words and support 😊💖
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what beauty in your words and picture dear KK.
Love these lines:
“whether I should also disregard
the feelings of pain and vulnerability
in my quest
for fragrance and beauty’
MAYBE hold them both as one.. 💖💖🌷🌷❣️🙏
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Thank you, Cindy for your kind words. I agree, we should hold both together. Much appreciated 😊💖💐
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It’s a pleasure. absolutely!!! 💖💖💖🌷🌷
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Amazing❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, Jermena 😊💖
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Beautifully written 👌👌👏👏
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Thank you so much 😊
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