
This life is
neither big nor long,
neither sweet nor sour,
neither hope nor despair,
neither a journey
nor a destination,
it is just beautiful,
it is as joyous as we think..
if we don’t enjoy our life,
its worthless,
we don’t have a life at all..
if we don’t enjoy
both highs and lows,
if we don’t take everything
as parts of life,
we have not understood
what is life..
we only live once
yes WOLO
and if we don’t experience
all facets of life,
we can’t say with confidence
that we have lived
our lives fullyโฆ
–Kaushal Kishore
Life is once…so the only motto should be to make it as grand and meaningful as possible. A lovely poetic work. Thanks for sharing.
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You are right. We should enjoy with whatever has been provided to us. Thank you Shayan for your appreciation and sharing your beautiful thoughts โบ๏ธ๐
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Dear Kaushal, Shayan, got it in one but what about, those with genetic diseases? They have pain and early death, and it isn’t fair or right.
Joanna
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Of course, it is painful. But they should also try to find happiness in their lives. Thinking about genetic diseases, or problems faced won’t make them feel any good. It’s important to accept the flaws, shortcomings and deficiencies…life’s all about pain and pleasure, right??
Btw, another beautiful piece, Sir๐
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I completely agree with you, Sonal, nobody is perfect. Instead of repenting what we don’t have, we should see how to use what we have gainfully. Thank you so much for your considered view and also for your words of appreciation โบ๏ธ๐
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Thank you Joanna for taking time to comment. I have seen a person happy and enjoying life with one leg using crutches. Good or bad, life is only one, unless we believe in reincarnation.
Dr. Viktor Frankl in his book, “Man’s Search for Meaning” had written that suffering is an ineradicable part of life, without which life cannot be complete. I have also stated in the poem that one should experience all facets of life. What I feel that we should live with and maximise our happiness with whatever God has given.
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Your comment is bringing the face of Claire Wineland again in front of my eyes. ๐ญ
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Thank you, Shayan. You have rightly quoted her name. So relevant here ๐
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Indeed, KK! Have a joyful weekend ๐๐
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Thank you, Ashley. You also enjoy your weekend ๐๐
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So true. This is beautiful!๐
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Thank you, Zina for your kind words and support ๐๐
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Absolutely true and so well put as always.๐๐๐
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I’m glad you liked it. Thank you, Grace for your words of appreciation ๐๐
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Very welcome.๐
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This is so beautiful! I love the piece but my favourite line has to be โyes WOLOโ โจ๐
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WOLO has been derived from YOLO, as I prefer to identify the self while writing. Thanks a lot, Muskaan, for your beautiful reflections ๐๐
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KK, an awesome poem, beautifully expressing the realities of life! โค Every experience, whether pleasurable or painful, enhances our understanding of life and can increase our empathy for others. ๐ As the signs in my classroom once said, "Learning is Fun!" and "Knowledge is Power."
Have a great week!
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Very well said, Cheryl. I’m obliged that you have referred to lovely quotes of your classroom. I liked your viewpoint. Thanks a lot for your support. Enjoy the weekend ๐ ๐๐
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Your comment is bringing the face of Claire Wineland again in front of my eyes. ๐ญ
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So beautiful and an excellent reminder to us all, dear KK! I love the unity you tied in at the end with, โwe only live onceโ – well said!! And I especially love that first stanza, itโs such a powerful intro!! Amazingly written, my awesome friend! Hereโs to living life to the fullest ๐ค๐ค
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Thank you, Ace for such an elaborate response. I’m overwhelmed. Thank you so so much for your generous praise. I deeply appreciate.๐๐
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Good one, KK! I’ve really been enjoying your poems. Thanks for sharing your words of wisdom!
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Thank you, Susan, for stopping by and your kind words and support ๐๐
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So true! What a great poem! Lovely words! โค๏ธ๐ป๐
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Thank you, Diana for your kind words and support ๐๐
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Good poem and beautiful Pic ๐๐ป
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Thank you so much, Siva jyothi for your appreciation ๐๐
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Great poetry!
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Thank you, Shivangi for your kind words ๐
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true๐
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Thank you, Ayushi ๐
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So inspiring poem ๐๐ท๐ This Beautiful Life once only ๐
How our parents and our grandparents fulfilled their duties
for us same we also do our duties for our parents and children .
When our parents need us we must help them and our Karma
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must do whatever difficulties . After we get the piece is our happiness
For our children also we want to settle their life also, we have made right
direction and getting the piece ,that make our lifeโs Success ๐ท๐๐
My comment ๐
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Whatever you have stated is completely true. Thank you for your beautiful reflections, as always ๐๐
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Thanks a lot ๐Sorry, my English writing very poor , any mistakes please forgrive me ๐๐
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Never mind, we all are learners here.๐๐
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๐ท๐๐ท๐
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So true. Very motivating lines!
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Thank you, Shweta for reading and appreciating!!
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Pleasure ๐ค
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Beautiful journey of life. Every moment to be celebrated.
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Yes, life is full of colours, and our efforts should be to enjoy all of them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts ๐
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Beautiful ๐ ๐ฅ
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Thank you so much ๐๐
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You, welcome ๐งก
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beautifully written
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Thank you, Manu for stopping by and for your kind words ๐
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Another good one. nice.
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Thank you for your appreciation ๐
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Beautiful and meaningful poetry. Keep writing! โค
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Thank you for stopping by and for your kind words ๐๐
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๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝlove this factual poem.๐๐ฝโค๐๐ฝ
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and appreciate๐๐๐
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Your very welcome KK !!
๐ฉ๐ฝโ๐ฆฑ๐๐ฝ๐
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I read/heard somewhere that, “You die only once, you live everyday till then.” and it has changed my perspective towards life for good.
We don’t know when will we receive our final call, so until then live everyday to the fullest and enjoy every moment of your life. Do what you always wanted to do, don’t procastinate and add it to your bucket list to be done at some other right time. As we have also heard, “Kaal kare so aaj kar, aaj kare so ab. Pal mein pralay hoyegi, bahuri karego kab?”
Thanks for this lively reminder! ๐
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Very well said, Lakshya! In Hindi they say, เคจ เคเคพเคจเฅ เคเฅเคจ เคธเฅ เคฌเคพเคค, เคเฅเคจ เคธเฅ เคฎเฅเคฒเคพเคเคพเคค เคเคเคฟเคฐเฅ เคนเฅ เคเคพเคฏเฅเคเฅ, เคจ เคเคพเคจเฅ เคเฅเคจ เคธเฅ เคถเคพเคฎ เคเคเคฟเคฐเฅ เคถเคพเคฎ เคนเฅ เคเคพเคเฅค it’s futile to be jealous or envious. There is nothing after this life. So one must live life to the hilt, enjoying all colours and shades. Thank you for reading and sharing your beautiful reflections ๐
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A lovely factual poem which reminds us of the importance of life and everything experience needed to go through. Treasure life and learn from events and emotions. Thank you for a wonderful post.
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Every moment makes the life, so one should enjoy each and every moment. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your wonderful thoughts and words of appreciation ๐
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So beautiful I love the bit about neither journey or destination, I always take about journey enjoying the journey, but really life just is.๐๐
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Well said. Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment. I appreciate your kind words ๐๐
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So true. We can’t experience the light without the dark ๐
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Well said, Monica. Thanks a lot for taking your time to read and leave your comment ๐๐
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Lovely
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Thank you so much for stopping by and for your appreciation!
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True words. My every effort is for making people’s lives better. You should include me too because I’m a part of them. That’s how I can understand their problems and issues.
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You are already included, my friend. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ๐ค
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A very lovely and true poem ๐งก
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Thank you for visiting and appreciating ๐๐
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That was a good read. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Tia for stopping by and your appreciation ๐๐
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This made me happy. Such a simple idea yet so complex at the same time. Living is something many tend to find difficult to understand including myself. Thank you.
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I’m really happy that you loved the post. It’s really encouraging. Thank you for stopping by and sharing your experiences and kind words ๐๐
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True.beautifully said๐ฅฐ
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Thank you for stopping by and your kind words.
I have already visited and followed your site, and liked your postsโบ๏ธ๐
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A life of only highs, without any lows, would end up being tedious or terrible or both.
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Yes, we must strike a balance. Thanks a lot for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!!
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Wow, this one is so so and so beautiful
Every words is so pure and precious ….
Life is not something to be framed in defination. Life is just meant for living and moreover learning…….
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I’m really glad that you liked the poem. It gives confidence. Thanks a lot for visiting and sharing your kind words and beautiful reflections ๐๐
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It’s my pleasure sir ๐ค๐
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Very true
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Thank you so much ๐๐
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Great words ๐๐๐
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Thank you for stopping by and kind words ๐๐
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Awesome thought๐
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Thanks a lot for visiting my site. I appreciate your feedback ๐
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Beautifully penned! Yes, we are just passing here and living life to the fullest is our greatest aim. Thank you for sharing!
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I’m really glad that you liked the poem. I also concur with your thoughts. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ๐
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You’re much welcome!
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Excellentโฆ.
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Thank you so much, Amruta !!
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Reading your poem reminded me of another poem
life is life fight for it.
Life is an opportunity, benefit from it.
Life is a beauty, admire it.
Life is bliss, taste it.
Life is a dream, realize it.
Life is a challenge, meet it.
Life is a duty, complete it.
Life is a game, play it.
Life is costly, care for it.
Life is wealth, keep it. Life is love, enjoy it.
Life is mystery, know it.
Life is a promise, fulfil it.
Life is a sorrow, overcome it.
Life is a song, sing it.
Life is a struggle, accept it.
Life is a tragedy, confront it.
Life is an adventure, dare it.
Life is luck, make it.
Life is too precious, do not destroy it.
Life is Life, fight for it.โ
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Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful inspiring poem ๐
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